Named Learning Chinese, the program located in CCTV9 because it can be convenient for us to receive. What’s more, you shall turn on the TV on 9:15 and 15:15 every Tuesday and Saturday. The hoster of the program is Dashan who is an Canadia and has rich experiense of learning Chinese. The program also contain Communicate in Chinese, Travel in Chinese, P.E. in Chinese. Above all, it is easily for you to learn, to get and to regard it an interest. It also helps to know and spread the cultural of China.
优点：包括了基本信息内容，连贯性较好。
不足：语言运用能力较差，单词拼写错误如Canadia、experiense。主持人应该是host，冠词使用不当；第三人称单数没加s；另外，漏信息点，如08年“奥运”始播。
得分：7
Save the Water
Peter and Mary were noticed that water tap was forgot to turn off when they were passing by. Mary rushed to the tap and turned it off, but Peter seemed not to have noticed it. Mary was disappointed about what Peter had done.
Each of us should follow Mary as a example. Water plays a important role in our life. No one can live without the water. To save the water is the duty of everyone. So I hope everyone can save the water as the Mary done.
My mother taught me how to save the water by her actions. She always collect the water which was used to washing or bath by a tank and water the flowers by it. She save the water as her words.
It’s our duty to save the water in our daily life.
优点：Summary部分基本能把原文要点概括全。正文能按要求写，举例子，有总结句，结构完整。
不足：冠词（定冠词和不定冠词）使用错误。Summary部分，被动语态使用不当。第三段举例时时态不统一，过去时和现在时混用，表达不流畅。冠词使用不当，如water没特指时要零冠词。
得分：3+12
责任编辑：李芳芳