1. 基础写作
2. Now there is a TV show named “Communicate in Chinese” can help you to improve your Chinese. It often plays at 9：50 and 15：15 from Tuesday to Saturday on the international channel 9 CCTV. The three parts of it are “ Social Chinese, Tour Chinese and Sport Chinese” and the last one will start to be played at the beginning of the Olympic Games in 2008. The DJ is an Canadian man named Da Shan Who has ample experience in learning Chinese. So this TV show is easy to understand and learn and it also can make you know more about Chinese culture.
评语：句子结构有问题，还有中英文表达不准确。11 分
Save the Source
From the passage we know that peter didn’t turn off the tap which was used by others because he thought it was none of his business. But Mary turned off it and felt disappointed about Peter .
From my point of vies, I think highly of Mary’s action. Because we live on the same earth, saving sources is our duty. Peter is a boy without any duties. Peter is a boy without any duties and doesn’t fit in our society.
In my campus, students around me always do their best to save the source. They turn off the light when they leave the classroom, they collect waste paper for recycling, they collect the used batteries as well. So precious is the source that we can’t afford to waste it. All of us will try our best to establish a source.
评论：summary 写得比较全面到位，下面的感言主要是用词不够准确，最后一句表达意思不清楚。 得分：19分
责任编辑：李芳芳