1 基础写作：
Here, I (would like to) introduce to you a TV program named Learning Chinese, which is on the (去掉)CCTV 9, the (an) international TV chennel (channel). From Tuesday to Satuaday, at 09:15 and 15:15, the program would be （is broadcast） on TV. The program is hosted by Da Shan, a Canadian, who has a lot of experience in learning Chinese. Including Communicate in Chinese and Travel in Chinese, the program add (added) the (去掉) Sport (Sports) in Chinese during the (Beijing) Olympic games. This program is not only easy and insterenting to under and studay, but also help the world know more about Chinese culture.
老师点评：本文基本上把信息点都写全了，并且结构和顺序安排得比较合理，有一定的句式变化，如同位语和定语从句的使用，分词作状语等，粗体字为本文的亮点词句。不足之处在于出现了太多的低级错误，特别是常用词的拼写错误，如划线词。评分：9（如果减少这些单词错误，本文可以得11分）
2读写任务
The mind (sense) of responsibility
Peter went on walking when he saw water was still running, and said it is (was) none of my (his) business. (While) Mary rush (rushed) to turn the tap off, and was very disappointed when hearing what Peter said.
I was very disappointed when I knew what Peter did. Peter thought he wasn’t resposible for the running water. However, we can solve this matter very easily. (两句的逻辑关系不能用However)
This story reminded me of a experience that happened to me. One day, on my way home, I happened to see a crowd of people. When I rush to see what happened, (was happening) I found that a man (was) lying on the ground, and (去掉)asking for help. However, the people didn’t come to offer their help. In the end, the doctor came and found that the man was out of breath.
From the two stories, I thought we must be responsible in our mind.
老师点评：本文的summary部分要点总结比较到位，但出现了错误（得3分），第二部分的段落结构安排得比较合理，有过渡句。亮点词汇、句式不多，见粗体字；不足之处在于出现了几次时态错误和句子结构错误。如划线词、句。最后的总结稍显简单。评分：3+13=16
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