The TV programme “Learning Chinese” monitored by Dashan, a Canadian with rich Chinese learning experience. Boardcasted at 9:15 and 15:15 between Tuesday and Saturday on CCTV 9, an international channel, is convenient for you to access. Chinese communication, Traveling Chinese as well as sports Chinese, started at 2008 Olympic Games, are including it the program. It’s so interesting and lively that make learning and understanding more easilier. By the programme, you not only can understand China culture, but also master Chinese well.
得分：7分
优点：本文作者用了几处的同位语， a Canadian, an international channel和过去分词做定语，monitored b, started at 2008和过去分词做状语，broadcasted at 9:15等；另外动词access也用得比较好。
不足：句子的写作基础不够扎实，第1.2.句子没有主语；词汇部分错误较多，Boardcasted拼写错误，应为 broadcasted, monitored ，are including和more easilier以及by the programme都用的不恰当,应分别改为hosted, are included, more easily(easier) 和through the programme.
Saving resource
Seeing the water was still running, Tom went on walking and Mary turned off the water tap. Tom thought it was not his business, so he didn’t turn off the tap.
It can’t fail to find that Mary has done a right thing. Because saving resource is everyone’s business.
It’s also easy to find some example. Some crazy children didn’t want to wash their cloths, so they used washing machine to wash their own cloths. Another example, one student in class turned on all the lights and fans.
In my opinion, wasting resource is a bad action. Most resource is limit. If we often waste them, they will be used up one day. So all of us should learn to save resource, like turn off the tap after using.
得分：3+10
优点：概括部分基本能交代清楚情节
不足：
1. 文章内容单薄，空洞，没有偏重。对Mary 或Peter行为的评述及自己理由讲得过于简单；在叙述身边所发生的类似的故事时所举之例不能称为“故事”，况且举了例子之后又没有交代通过例子想传达什么思想；最后的“感受与启发”，感受就是“这个行为不好”，启发就是“我们应该节约资源”，没有自己的想法，空喊口号。
2.词汇的使用错误较多。Cloths,应为clothes, limit 应为limited, it can’t fail to find主语应该是sb，最后的like turn off the tap应该是like turning等。
责任编辑：李芳芳