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上海中考英语作文
在现实生活或工作学习中，许多人都写过作文吧，作文是人们以书面形式表情达意的言语活动。写起作文来就毫无头绪？下面是小编帮大家整理的上海中考英语作文，欢迎阅读与收藏。
上海中考英语作文1
My Hometown
My hometown is beautiful place It stands near a wide river at the foot of low GREen hills. It has many tall buildings and wide streets. There are trees and flowers everywhere. But it has not always been like that. In the old days, it was a sad dirty little town. Landlords and merchants lived in the few good houses. For the working people there were only dark, unhealthy rooms in old buildings and huts in narrow muddy streets. Nearly everyone was poor and many had no work. Everything has changed since liberation. The people, led by the Party, have got rid of the mud and dirt. They have put up schools, theaters, shops and flats. They have an assembly hall and a hospital. Along the river they have built offices, hotels and parks. A lot of factories have sprung up. On the river, streamers and boats come and go busily, day and night. They carry the products of our industries to all parts of the country. I love my hometown, and I love its people. They also have changed. Healthy and happy, they are going all out to build socialism.
上海中考英语作文2
In the box you can find an energy-saving lightbulb. They all come from 20xx. By holding the little bulb in your hand, you can sense its smooth, transparent glass-made shell, which is of oval shape. Inside the shell, some metal-made wires tangle with each other in a regular order. This is used to enable electricity to pass through the whole bulb to provide energy. Attach the bulb to a base and then turn on the switch, you’ll find the little bulb lighting up the dark room. Another characteristic of it is that it saves more energy than other kinds of bulbs. So this lightbulb is “green”.
We hope this will give you some information about life in 20xx.
Yours faithfully, Angel
作文评析
此篇作文题来自牛津9B第二单元课后Writing练习，它的内容是向未来20xx年的人们写一封信，介绍一件我们这个时代所用的物品。作文题材是学生平时不常操练的说明文。
本文作者选取了节能灯泡作为对象。在描述过程中，她首先对灯泡的外形进行了细致的描写，从光滑、椭圆型的.玻璃外壳，到内部互相缠绕在一起的金属丝。继而写到当电流通过，灯泡会照亮房屋的功能。最后还不忘介绍此种灯泡的特殊之处在于比起其它灯泡，它“节能环保”的特点。
全文脉络清晰，描写细腻、形象、生动，句式丰富，语言流畅，衔接自然，结构紧凑。充分体现了作者的语言表达能力，是一篇很好的说明文范例。
上海中考英语作文3
There are few things in life more annoying than being laughed at. When I failed to solve the question on the blackboard and just stood in front of it without saying a word, I could hear those annoying whispers. This really made a perfectionist like me get angry. But I couldn’t let the anger get me out of control. Instead, I chose to ignore those ironic words and focus on the question. In addition, I decided to work harder after school to get myself improved. Due to all the changes I made, I believe I can avoid being laughed at in the future.
作文评析
全文结构清晰，层次分明，衔接流畅。本文从内容来看观点新颖、构思巧妙，以”being laughed at”被动语态的结构体现作者内心的不情愿，紧扣题目中的angry。作者侧重对于第二个问题的回答，以生动、细腻的文笔描写了站在黑板前的心理活动，让人读来有生临其境之感。而在结尾，作者不忘传播一丝正能量，驱赶了这个作文题可能带来的`负面情绪。本文的内涵和语言都反映出作者的语言驾驭能力，以开头”There are few things … more … than …”来看，作者有丰富的语言积淀和极强的语言运用能力，因而全篇行文流畅，句式丰富，用词精准。本文值得初三学生学习借鉴。
上海中考英语作文4
Good habits are foundations on our way to success, while bad ones get in the way and hold us back. To begin with, good habits help us work more efficiently. If we get into the habit of tidying up our rooms, we will find it easy to obtain the things we need. Moreover, good habits leave others positive impressions. Showing our warm smiles is a habit which enables us to get along with our classmates and teachers well. On the other hand, bad habits can be destructive. Lots of people develop lung cancer just because of their habits of smoking. As you can see, habits really make a difference in our lives.
作文评析
本文开门见山陈述观点，说理清晰。能运用举例对比等手法使本文观点更具说服力，如通过整理房间、微笑和吸烟三个习惯的'后果正反两方举例，体现出小作者思维的宽度和缜密度。
从语言驾驭能力看，本文句式丰富，语言流畅，既善于活用考纲词组如“get into the habit of”，又有如“leave others positive impressions”等地道的表达，既有较复杂的主从复合句，又有短小有力的简单句，错落有致，一气呵成。
上海中考英语作文5
I took a trip to Shanghai with my mother during the seven-day holiday. It took us more than two hours to drive to Shanghai from my home in Haimen. We stayed in a large hotel on the eighth floor. On the first day, I just stayed in the hotel and rested. On the second day, my brother and I went to Nanjing Road. It’s the busiest street in Shanghai. When we got there, there were lots of people. We walked from one shop to another. I bought two T-shirts and two pairs of trousers for the coming summer. The T-shirts and trousers I bought are all white because white is my favourite colour. My brother also bought some clothes. On the third day, my mother took me to Jinjiang Entertainment Centre. It was full of people. I played many kinds of games there. I had a good time. The other days, I went to some other interesting places, such as the Oriental Bright Pearl TV Tower, the Huangpu River and Shanghai International Conference Centre. I didn’t forget to do my homework in the evening. I had a full and happy holiday.
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上海中考英语作文6
As we all know, it’s very important to keep healthy. But do you know how to keep healthy?
Firstly, I think we must have enough food to keep us healthy. Breakfast is necessary. It gives us energy for morning. We must also have the right kind of food. Remember to eat more fruit and vegetables, but less junk food. Don’t forget to wash your hands before meals.
Secondly, it’s necessary for us to take exercise. Exercise will keep us active and strong.
Thirdly, I think staying up is bad for our health. It we can’t get enough sleep, we may have a headache. We should go to bed early and get up early.
Lastly, listening to music or chatting can also make us feel relaxed.
我们都知道，保持健康是非常重要的。但是你知道如何保持健康吗?
首先，饮食要全面。早餐当然是必不可少的，它为我们一上午的活动提供着能量。同时，我们还应该注重饮食的质量，记得要多吃些水果和蔬菜，少吃一些无营养食品。就餐前请不要忘记先洗手。
其次，加强体育锻炼也是不容忽视的'，它可以让我们保持活力与强健。
第三，熬夜对我们的身体有害。如果我们睡眠不足，就有可能引起头痛。因此我们应该早睡早起。
最后一点，听听音乐或者聊聊天也可以让我们身心放松下来。
上海中考英语作文7
I have a beautiful house. my parents and i live in our house now. it is near the lake. we all like our house. we are very happy. our house is not very big, but i think it is very good. look! here is the door. it is open. let us go and visit our house. welcome to our house. there are three bedrooms, a kitchen, a bathroom and a large sitting room in our house. let us look at my small room first. there is a bookcase in my room. there are many books in the bookcase. on the right of the bookcase, there is a bed. there is a doll and some clothes on the bed. there are a lot of posters on the wall. near the bookcase, there is a desk. i study at it every day. on the desk, there is a computer. i often play computer games on it. there are two lamps and a clock in my small room, too. look at our parents’ room, there is a tv and a sofa. there is a big bed in it, too. there are lots of pictures and two lamps on the wall. then look at our sitting room, there is a tv and two sofas in it. there are two tables and chairs in the sitting room, too. we like our house very much. do you like it?
上海中考英语作文8
Magazines, as one form of ways to wisdom, are my favorite. Magazines combine the advantages of all forms of books. They have the diversity of information and at the same time, hold deep thoughts. There is rarely a thing that you can’t find in magazines. Reading magazines has provided me with the opportunity to broaden my horizon, gain knowledge and meanwhile, relax. Since they are more portable than others, you can roll them up and take them with you. In brief, reading magazines has brought laughter and knowledge to my life. I like reading magazines best.
作文评析
该篇文章开宗明义，点名文章意图。从内容上看，从杂志包罗万象，开拓读者视野；到杂志放松读者心情；再谈到杂志携带方便可以随时取阅等优点，清晰详实地表达出了作者的观点。文章结尾再次点题，全文简短却简练，切题又精炼。从语言而言，作者具有较强的.语言功底，能够熟练运用多样的句式和词组，如meanwhile, since, in brief, provide with等，使文章更富有变化和可读性。语句之间衔接通畅，用词准确自然。词汇量丰富，如wisdom, diversity, opportunity, laughter等。如果文章能在三点优点前用明显的词汇加以区分，如first, furthermore, what’s more等，能使其更加一目了然。
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